Wednesday, November 16, 2011

"Brutal" Class Rules Poem

So this poem was created using a set of rules that I frankly consider brutal, and so did our professor. We weren't very nice to each other.

Here's the list of rules, and my poem follows all of them, though it doesn't do very much else. Therefore, you will shortly see a new version of this poem:

1. 10 syllable lines
2. must include the name of your first pet
3. tell a joke
4. a direct contrast
5. use at least one color
6. limit of five adjectives
7. must have a rhyme pattern
8. must use the word defenestrate
9. must include at least one human member of your family
10. needs a good title
11. must use the word soul in a non-cliche way
12. use dialogue
13. use alliteration
14. include a precious metal/gem
15. must include a quote from Abraham Lincoln
16. have a reference to a favorite trip
17. the first word in the poem must start with the first letter of your name
18. include an allusion to your favorite book
19. must mention a plant or a vegetable

Beauty and the Beast

Amant, j'ai vu l'écart entre la belle

et la bête. Defenestrate all your shells.

Let me see your souls- no your soles- your feet

Are my windows to walking on the street.

Walking down the street in Mexico, black

Sunglasses, tendrils of hair whipping back

And forth. Shall I buy silver earrings with

Opals and amethyst? Why yes, forthwith.

Papa always taking pictures of us

But now we’re back home with a lot less fuss.

Sadie’s long gone, a savage bull that could

Not bear the yoke, when she bit they would

Make sure she choked. Character is like a

Tree, reputation like a shadow grey.



Phew. Aren't you glad you're done reading that?

The next poem was a result of an in class writing session where we were shown different pictures, each picture separated by a stanza:



You Walk Through It

I tried not to look at it,

But I couldn’t help myself-

The sun was so bright

It stained my eyes

Green and purple

Like a giant bruise.

There was a slight,

Misty fog so light

As to be almost

Inconsequential.

The sun shot rays

Of gold and silver,

Diffusing all the other

Colors. The cattails

Glowed as if they were

On fire, or had been

Linked to an electrical

Line. The sun’s sticky

Fingers grabbed everything

They could find.


I had forgotten

What a sight they were:

“Moo” cows on a green

Hill, basking in the sun

Like snakes who needed

To increase their

Body temperature.

If they could yawn,

They would yawn.

One of their ears

Will twitch as they

Survey the land,

Not quite ready for

A nap.

They fly by when

You pass them in

A car, but if you

Go running with your Dad,

And you call to them,

You can make the oafs

Get up and chase you.


All this was a week

After I saw the

Hazy motion of the

Smoke fill the yard.

Apparently, it was a

Burn day. I felt bad

For the cats-

Today the weren’t

Quite the masters

Of the universe.

They weren’t allowed

To play in the piles

Of broken limbs

And thousands of

Needles and pinecones-

The result of hours

Of labor. Daddy

Picks them up and

They nuzzle his goatee

And groom him.

Then they wiggle

Loose and they’re off

To get that frog.

Mom will be heartbroken.

You can smell the wood

Burn, its flesh blackening

At the edges and then

Reaching the core,

Until there’s nothing

Left but a few ashes.


When I think of it

Now, what I remember

Is the cobalt sky

Settling on top

Of the cherry filling.

The landscape silhouetted

Like the little shapes

Of dogs and horses

My grandmother

Used to cut out for me.

The world turns dark,

Color is slipping away,

Sinking into the earth,

Which will spit it

Back out in the morning.

Everyone notices

When the moon is full

And close, but tonight

It’s far away.


Once I saw my brother

Fly off his bike

During a race,

Crashing down

On top of it.

The day was just

Beginning to cool

And darken-

A beautiful night.

And we were off

To the emergency room.

Nothing was broken-

Just a bruised back

And some bruised pride.

Wind knocked out

And blown back in.

He looked so good

Up there by the

Starting gate, wearing

All his mandatory gear,

And smiling like

He didn’t know how

To stop.


And in a dream

Once I saw death

Stare me in the face,

Looking similar to

A Georgia O’Keefe

Painting of a cow skull.

Death was bony, with

Hot, cracked, dry skin.

We were in the middle

Of nowhere,

In the middle of nothing.

And so I shook

His hand, and he

Dissolved and left me

Alone in the desert.

I sat down and cried,

And the tear soaked

Into the dirt, and

The dream changed.

And Death was there

Again, so I gave him

A hug- he thought I

Was crazy.


Now I’m at the beach,

Running down the hot

Sand barefoot, trying not

To burn the soles of

My feet, or to step on

Anything I would rather

Not step on. A seagull

Was having a confrontation

With a crab at the water’s

Edge. The crab seemed

Unhappy, so I ran

Listening to my toes slap

The wet sand, waving

My arms, and the bird

Flew off and settled

Down the beach.

The crab didn’t appreciate

Me fighting his battles,

He scuttled off without

Saying thank you.


They say you shouldn’t

Go walking by yourself

In the city, and you

Definitely shouldn’t

Go in those dark

Tunnels by yourself.

Sure, you can see

All the way through

To the end, and you’re

Carrying pepper spray,

But you can never

Be too careful for

Your mother.

It’s a good thing

She doesn’t know

You walk through it

Every night.


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